In a moment…

Arun was having a tough day yet again. But then it was nothing new. It seemed that life had become a spectrum of difficult times interspersed with very tiny windows of sanity! Just 5 years ago, Arun’s life was idyllic. His wife, Shanti, worked as a teacher in a school. A committed teacher, she loved being around young minds. They shared a respectful, easygoing relationship that most husbands and wives settle into a few years into matrimony. He worked in a bank. And their 10-year-old daughter, Vasundhara, was a bright student in the same school where Shanti taught. Life was happy. Routine was comforting!

Shanti was complaining of back pain since a few days. The pain was becoming extremely nagging so much yet she always put off her doctor visits due to her hectic schedule. Shanti tried yoga and pain killers, but her pain just got worse. Finally, one day, suddenly her back gave way. She just could not get up from bed. Arun rushed her to the nearby hospital where their trusted family doctor practiced. She had a prolapsed disc and needed immediate surgery. While being wheeled into surgery, Shanti was worried about them finishing  and reaching home before Vasu got back from school. Arun squeezed her hand and assured her that the neighbors would take care of her. With a smile on her face despite the pain, Shanti was taken in the OT as Arun waited outside.

An hour later, Shanti was shifted into the general ward while under the effects of anesthesia. She suffered some problems in her recovery from anesthesia and lapsed into a vegetative state. His smiling, energetic Shanti is now a distant memory. The woman sharing his bed has shrunk in size, is riddled by bed sores and gazes at everyone with an empty stare. She hasn’t spoken a word since that fateful day. Arun now singlehandedly runs the house. Vasu has aged beyond her years and stoically handles her studies as well as some household chores while the househelp chips in with Shanti’s chores. Both father and daughter pin their hopes on an elusive day when the mainstay of their lives will miraculously get up and be normal. Arun is fighting a malpractice case against the hospital. Some days, he just wants to quit the misery of this godforsaken life, but the thought of his daughter keeps him going to face yet another horrible day.

How drastically life transforms in a moment!

This is a fictional tale!

64 responses to “In a moment…”

  1. The Fool Avatar

    Now – what is this? Some real story of a friend?

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      This is a short fictional tale. It has no resemblance to anyone I know.

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  2. Roshan Radhakrishnan Avatar

    everytime i start a case, I pray to a dozen Gods in my head that nothing should go wrong to them… touchwood so far I’ve been lucky. But the fear that this may occur is always there for me.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Yes, of course, Roshan, who can know this better than you! So grateful for the fantastic docs who take care of all of us.

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  3. alkagurha Avatar

    How our lives can change for better or worse in a matter of seconds- a phone call, a fatal fall, an unintentional mistake, an accident. Anything. Life is delicate as Arun discovered.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Yes, in a matter of seconds, life can transform drastically! Thanks for reading, Alka!

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  4. iwrotethose Avatar

    Wow! Short, yet powerful. Not sure if it was for a writing prompt or inspired by a real life scenario – either ways, beautifully written. Shame about Shanti and Arun though 😦

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Thanks, Sid! No prompts just a story inspired by so many accidents we read about everyday in the newspapers. Thanks for reading!

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  5. Garima nag Avatar

    It might be a fictional tale but many suffer a similar fate . Nice writing Rachna 🙂

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Thanks Garima!

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  6. Aditi Avatar

    Very powerful…sad too and you narrated it so well!! Life can change in a moment true….One must not ignore any signs that the body gives and proper medical treatment is so imp. One thing amiss and your life changes into the unimaginable!

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Exactly, Aditi! Especially women, we just seem to put off caring for our own healths.

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  7. Bhagyashree Avatar

    I have read similar cases. And I shudder to think that when even reading is so painful, how the people undergoing endure it

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      It sends shivers down my spine too just imagining the situation, Bhagya!

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  8. Jas Avatar

    I read about a case similar to this in paper and the heart just shudders at the thought that this is a reality of somebody.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Oh yes, the newspapers are filled with stories of botched surgeries and accidents. It just makes me so terribly sad.

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  9. Smita Avatar

    So well written Rachna and the most important thing that I take out from this story is that we women neglect ourselves….we always put our family first……but it shouldn’t be done at the cost of our health…hai na?? Because It only take a moment to change everything…

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Absolutely right, Smita! Yet tragedies can strike anyone.

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  10. Seeta Bodke Avatar

    That is how life is… isnt it?.. it can take an unexpected turn at any moment, nobody knows what is in store for us… beautifully written Rachna

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Yes, life can be so scary! Thanks for reading, Seeta!

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  11. Sandhya Kumar Avatar

    i know that these types of incidents happen. What should we call it? Karma or god’s curse? If this is for a short span, it won’t matter, but permanent damage to their lives is horrible…but they happen.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      It fails me why this happens. Don’t know what to categorize it as. The accidents we read in newspapers are so scary.

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  12. Jairam Mohan Avatar

    I have heard crazy stories about surgeries on the spine going horribly wrong and people ending up in vegetative or paralyzed states. This story clearly brought that aspect out.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Thanks, Jairam! So very scary when that happens.

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  13. chsuresh63 Avatar

    God – that was a tragedy!

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Terribly sad! Thanks for reading!

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  14. kayemofnmy Avatar

    Sad tale. Enjoyed your writing.

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  15. Shilpa Garg Avatar

    Life can become topsy-turvy in a flash of a second. A family friend lost his wife due to anesthesia issues during a regular surgery. Gosh, it was terrible to see him struggle with a few months old daughter. In a flash of a second their small beautiful world came crashing down!

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Oh Gosh, that is so very sad. No one can imagine how catastrophe can strike in an instant.

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  16. latha Avatar

    It happens, Rachna. Not in fiction, in real. Remember the last post I have written about the lady who passed away suddenly…similar to this right? How the schedule messes up…just in a day…just with the beat of a pulse..I always wonder, what if it happens to me? How is the life going to look like?

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      I know. I also wonder sometimes. As a matter of fact, when I was taken in to the OT for the second son’s birth, all morbid thoughts raced through my minds.

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  17. purbaray Avatar

    It’s a story for us but reality for many families out there. That’s why it’s so important to count our blessings and cherish the present. God knows what future has in store for us!

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      I completely agree with every word you say!

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  18. Nabanita Avatar

    It’s such a touching story…! and true live can change in a moment!

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Thanks, Naba! Scary, isn’t it?

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  19. Diwakar Narayan Avatar

    That is the reason they complement life with ‘ups and downs’… Rachna.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Yes, but this kind of down can almost completely destroy your life, isn’t it?

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  20. Pratibha Avatar

    The truth of life! Well written

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Thanks, Pratibha!

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  21. Saru (@PerfectOdyssey) Avatar

    Thank God, it’s fictional. Very well written, this short fiction moved me.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Thanks, Saru! Yes, thank heavens it is fictional but I am sure we have read about such unfortunate incidents in newspapers.

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  22. Priya Avatar

    Well written! We can plan all we want, but one never knows what the next hour or minute has in store for us.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      True that, Priya! And that is such a scary thought!

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  23. sakshinanda Avatar

    I lost my mother-in-law to medical negligence a couple of years back. Sometimes, the loss is so spirit shattering, you just cannot pick up cudgels against the establishment that erred.
    Touching post.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      I lost my mother to side effects of medication that she was taking which destroyed her liver. I don’t know who to blame — the doctors who were so negligent or fate? You are right; it shatters you in a helpless sort of way! Hugs, Sakshi, for you had to go through a truly testing time.

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  24. Jyotsna Bhatia Avatar

    Touching story. Made me sad. Thousands of such stories happen at hospitals across our country and the suferers are not just patients but their loved ones too.. And the hospitals, nobdy knows if any punishment is ever doled out to them.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Yes, these cases of medical negligence can cripple families not only with the loss of loved ones but often in medical bills and mental trauma. The powerful triumph which is the saddest part. Thanks for reading, Jyotsna!

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  25. Nischala Avatar

    I thought it was real till the end. Life’s like that, I don’t know if the most difficult life moments are you suffer or see dear ones suffer for life! But some times its that one second which changes your life forever. Wonderfully penned Rachna

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      I agree, Nischala! It is heartbreaking to see a near and dear one suffer. Thanks for reading!

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  26. Rekha Avatar

    Medicine is one area where I feel people need to be extra-cautious and a many a time luck plays a very vital role. Sad but realistic story. Feel sorry for the many who’ll be going through it day in and day out. My prayers!

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Yes, things can suddenly go wrong. It makes you feel so jittery about life sometimes.

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  27. Ashwini C N Avatar

    This might be fiction, but there have been numerous incidents like this which almost alter the course of our life in a single second. Perhaps all this will help us to stop and look around those whom we care for and count our blessings.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Yes, that is what I do every single time. Say a silent prayer for my loved ones. Thanks for reading, Ashwini!

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  29. BellyBytes Avatar

    WHile this story of yours is fiction there are many true life incidents where everything you’ve worked for goes up in seconds right before your eyes. Life is too fleeting to waste.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Great message there, BellyBytes! Life is indeed too fleeting to waste.

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  30. B k chowla Avatar

    Rachna,medical negligence can play havoc with one’s life.Your post is a fictional tale,but,in real life it happens too.
    Our neighbour’s daughter….only child….. diagnosed with cancer which she never had.You can imagine the time parents would have gone through for weeks till a second opinion and check up threw up the truth.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      That’s terrible, Chowlaji! The parents must have been through hell. I feel so sorry that negligence by doctors can have terrible consequences.

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      Thanks a lot!

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  32. ilakshee Avatar

    It is tragedies like these that make us count our blessings. And there are so many Aruns and Shantis out there making us realise this. Crisply narrated Rachna.

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    1. Rachna Avatar

      Thank you for reading, Ilakshee! Yes, count our blessings for sure.

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