Ominous

Ominous

That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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That was a wonderful post from KP, have always enjoyed his stories and articles, love the way he depicts the characters.Just got to read your posts, I find the topics u write interesting
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Gosh! I had goosebumps while reading the last line..although I kind of had an idea about the end, the narrative held me captive.Thanks Rachna for introducing me to another great blogger.Sir, I’ll visit your blog for more wonderful stories.
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My goodness, goosebumps here too.
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glad you liked it Agnes.
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K P / Rachna,Very well told. I could barely guess the twist in the end. However my own experience is that some events do caste shadow in advance.Take care
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OMG!! Shocking end!!But a wonderfully woven story!
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I follow Random Thoughts avidly and I must say that this one of Partha’s best!! He manages to get a lot through in very few words.
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Yes it was shocking for the guy too.Glad you liked the story,Shilpa
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That is a warm tribute from one of the best writers of short stories,Meera.Thanks
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A good story it was a thriller too
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You have always been a great support.Thanks
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I assure you NRIGirl that my next story will be on a happy note.
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I have been a follower of KP, and had always liked his stories.This is such a thrilling story.
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Thank you Rachna for introducing another great blogger.
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I am happy you enjoyed this story and other stories that KP sir writes.
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Good one KP.thanks Rachana-for the good gesture
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Thanks Chitra and welcome here.
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Aha…what an end. Brilliantly woven, Partha Sir
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Scary story, very well narrated, Partha Sir!
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Nice to know you, Rachna!
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Thank you Sandhya. Nice to have you here.
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KP has a real talent for stories. I often wonder how he writes so many so often! And this one, I would say is one of his best. Loved the post! 🙂
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Thank you Rama,,Chitra,Bhagyashree,Sandhya and Destiny’s child for the nice words.Your steady encouragement is the inspiration for meto try my hand in story writingFound in Folsom ,you are a new reader thanks to Rachna.Thanks for the comment on many stories
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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I’ve been a regular reader of Random Thoughts from the time I hit the site for the first time. KParthasarathi has been an inspiration for me to attempt short stories. His writing is simple and the narration style is splendid. This story carries with it emotions and thrills that one looks for in a good read. Nice one Partha Sir.
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KP has a new follower in me
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Brilliant KP. I have always loved the way you have a twist in your stories. Keeps me coming back for more!
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Ashwini,Chowla and Deepa,A big thanks for the nice words
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Partha sir, you have convinced me to take the howling of dogs on dark nights more seriously now.A chilling story.Vasanta.R.
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interesting nd wow i drooled n ur story…
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That was a tale brilliantly told. Some superstitions come true because we subconsciously believe in them or at least appear to come true. I will look out for the guy in black coat with an outsized mustache 🙂
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I had to re-read the story to calm my nerves. Enough said! :)@Rachna-Thanks for introducing a wonderful writer.
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I am happy you enjoyed the story, Aditya :).
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This is one spine chilling terror filled horror story. Congrats KP for this gripping & riveting story !
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wow.. what a twist.. loved it!
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Quite a story it was, KP:)
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perfect twist-er..
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